How to comment on a zoning application so the board actually has to answer

Boards decide against written criteria in the ordinance. Comments tied to those criteria enter the record. Comments about how a project feels do not.

Written by
Roy Castellano
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924 words, about 4 minutes
A site plan drawing, a printed ordinance excerpt with blurred text, a ruler and a stack of photographs face down arranged flat on a plain table
A site plan drawing, a printed ordinance excerpt with blurred text, a ruler and a stack of photographs face down arranged flat on a plain table

A notice arrives about an application near you. There is a hearing in three weeks. Most people who show up speak from feeling, and most of what they say cannot be used by the board even where members agree with it.

The reason is structural. A board deciding a special permit or a variance is applying criteria written in the ordinance, and it has to make findings against those criteria. Testimony that does not touch them cannot support a finding, so it cannot change an outcome or survive an appeal.

Comments that work are built from documents. Here is the sequence.

1. Get the file, not the notice

The mailed notice contains almost nothing. The application file contains everything, and it is public record.

Request or download:

  • The application form itself, which states what relief is being sought and under which section of the ordinance.
  • The plans, including the site plan with dimensions.
  • Any traffic, drainage, or environmental study submitted.
  • The staff report, if one has been issued. This is the most valuable document in the file.
  • Prior decisions on the same parcel, which are often referenced and rarely attached.

The staff report is a professional planner's written analysis of whether the proposal complies. If it recommends approval with conditions, those conditions are the negotiation. If it identifies a deficiency, that deficiency is where your comment has leverage.

2. Find the criteria the board must apply

Open the ordinance to the section the application cites. Special permits, variances and site plan approvals each have their own list of standards, and the list is usually short and numbered.

Typical criteria include whether the use is compatible with the neighborhood, whether traffic can be handled safely, whether utilities and drainage are adequate, whether the hardship claimed for a variance arises from the land rather than from the applicant's plans, and whether the proposal is consistent with the comprehensive plan.

Write the numbered list down. That list is now the outline of your comment.

3. Match evidence to each criterion

For each numbered standard, ask what you personally know that bears on it, and what document supports it.

  • Drainage: photographs of where water currently stands after a storm, with dates.
  • Traffic and safety: sight distance at the driveway location, measured. The number of times the street is blocked by delivery vehicles, observed and dated.
  • Utilities: whether the street has had water pressure or sewer issues, and whether the capital improvement plan schedules work there.
  • Consistency with the plan: the page and map in the comprehensive plan that says what this area is intended to be.

What does not help: property values, who the applicant is, what the neighborhood used to be like, and general opposition. Boards hear all of it and cannot act on any of it.

4. Write it before the hearing and submit it in writing

The written submission matters more than the spoken one. It enters the record in full, it is read by members in advance, and it is what an appellate body would review.

Format that works:

  1. One paragraph stating who you are, where you are relative to the site, and what you are asking the board to do: deny, approve with specific conditions, or continue for more information.
  2. A numbered section for each criterion, with the evidence under it.
  3. Attachments, labeled and referenced by number in the text.
  4. A short closing stating the specific conditions you would accept if the board approves.

Send it to the board's clerk or planning staff before the submission deadline stated in the notice, and ask for confirmation that it has been entered into the record.

5. Ask for conditions rather than denial

This is the practical move that changes outcomes most often.

Denials are rare, appealable, and expensive for everyone. Conditions are routine and boards impose them readily, particularly where a neighbor has proposed something specific and reasonable.

Conditions that get imposed because someone asked: limits on hours of operation or delivery, a specific location for a driveway, screening or fencing along a boundary, a lighting standard that keeps light off adjacent property, retention of a tree line, a construction traffic route, and drainage designed for a specified storm event.

Bring these as written language. A board can adopt a sentence handed to it. It is much less likely to draft one from a complaint.

6. Speak briefly and to the outline

Three minutes is the common limit. Use it to say who you are, which criteria you addressed in your written submission, and what specific condition you are asking for.

Do not read the whole submission. It is already in the record, and members have it.

7. Read the decision when it issues

The written decision states the findings and any conditions. Two things to check: whether conditions you asked for were included, and whether they are drafted enforceably. A condition requiring screening is enforceable. A condition saying the applicant will work with neighbors is not.

If a condition matters to you, note who enforces it. Usually the building department at the permit stage, and that is the moment to confirm the plans reflect it.

What this approach actually achieves

Comments built this way get answered, because the board must make findings on the criteria and a documented comment on a criterion cannot be passed over silently.

It is also less work than it appears. Reading the staff report and the numbered criteria takes an evening, and it turns a frustrating three minutes at a microphone into a submission that shapes what gets built.


About the writer

Roy CastellanoRoy writes about how the current way of doing things arrived.